As a college student,I have a lot of free time.So,to find a part-time job is essential!But it's not easy to find a part-time job,especially one that fits you very well.
 　I have been trying to find a part-time job these days on the Internet,teacher,model,agency……no people wonld like to employ me as I have no working experiences.Right!I'm new here,just graduate from senior high.There's no doubt about it.But that is life!If you want to find such jobs,then you should have experiences.So I have no choice but to be a fast-food distributor.I had made a deal with the boss that I can start my work today,and I decided not to work for the boss of another restaurant.To my srprise,when I rang my boss up and asked her how to start my work,she said she was busy at the moment and she would ring me back later.I felt a bit disappointed.
 　One day past,there was still no call for me.To be initiative is very important for an employee.So I rang my boss again.Unluckily,she let me down again.The reply was that there was something wrong with her business.She didn't need me at the moment.I was confused that why she didn't say so!She could just explain it to me and I could wait.Sliences could do nothing to thte problem.When I turned back to the other restaurant,it was too late,they had enough employees.My heart was filled with disappointment.
 　Now I'm trying to make a survey on the students of Grady 3 and Grade 4,but something has come up,they don't want to co-operate with my jobbecause I want too much of their personal information.So I'm still on my way

冒似没什么内容。。。。。。。句式浅显，用法平常化。好像普通作业。。

加油啊。用英语写作。。。。

就像在写作业啊

第四行wonld应为would，倒数第六行thte应为the吧

LS 好眼力！！

不过好像是第七行wonld应为would  ～～～

没经验是甘的了 :~7 :~7 习惯就好了