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[原创]一晚训吾着写的，比写意见吧
- gameland LV.排长
- 2011/4/13 10:50:30
<p> </p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 48pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">静夜思 </span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;">
</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">鹊桥约</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 静夜无月灯火明， 牛郎织女银河隔，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 床头反复心不静． 七月鹊桥定不忘．</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 君思社稷鸟思林， 海枯石烂总有期，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 我思一人夜难眠． 他刻心中永不灭．</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><p></p></span></p><p> 在压韵与对仗方面好似有Ｄ问题，请指导指导！！</p>
</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">鹊桥约</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 静夜无月灯火明， 牛郎织女银河隔，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 床头反复心不静． 七月鹊桥定不忘．</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 君思社稷鸟思林， 海枯石烂总有期，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"> 我思一人夜难眠． 他刻心中永不灭．</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><p></p></span></p><p> 在压韵与对仗方面好似有Ｄ问题，请指导指导！！</p>
- likangan
- 2011/4/13 14:07:48
，，情诗，，好象有点不压韵，请高人吧。
- 幽琳琳
- 2011/4/14 4:27:02
我净系觉得睇得好辛苦...下次lz排好d啦。情诗只为抒发嘎姐，无话好唔好既。
- 2009201100
- 2011/4/14 19:32:16
<p>韵方面．．好似有滴问题感握～～</p>
- weiqings
- 2011/4/15 12:20:10
唔系好压韵,不过都顶