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- hyram LV.连长
- 2013/9/16 19:52:14
2010年10月3日星期日
Why people live a longer life now?
Nowadays, everyone of us is confronted with too many examples of people live a longer life . It is not strange to read the news that in some villiages , there are a large number of elderly who lives more than 100 years.
Consequently, people are interested in why other people live a longer life now. To begin with ,the living standards such as food, accommodations, environments have been tremendous raised which play an important role in lenghtening lifespan. Moreover, it is indispensible to have a good mood and be oprimistic when facing difficulties . Furthermore, being friendly and shareing emotions with others is a good way to make people healthier both physically and mentally.
Personally , I am glad to see that more and more people live a longer life. Since if we live longer ,then we can appreciate more beauty in lives. There are many measures to help us live longer such as doing exercises regularly, having balanced dier everyday, relaxing after work or study and so on ,. Only through these ways can we live a longer and healthier life.
Why people live a longer life now?
Nowadays, everyone of us is confronted with too many examples of people live a longer life . It is not strange to read the news that in some villiages , there are a large number of elderly who lives more than 100 years.
Consequently, people are interested in why other people live a longer life now. To begin with ,the living standards such as food, accommodations, environments have been tremendous raised which play an important role in lenghtening lifespan. Moreover, it is indispensible to have a good mood and be oprimistic when facing difficulties . Furthermore, being friendly and shareing emotions with others is a good way to make people healthier both physically and mentally.
Personally , I am glad to see that more and more people live a longer life. Since if we live longer ,then we can appreciate more beauty in lives. There are many measures to help us live longer such as doing exercises regularly, having balanced dier everyday, relaxing after work or study and so on ,. Only through these ways can we live a longer and healthier life.

- lj724550
- 2013/9/16 23:01:08
垃圾东西,我看都看不懂

- 策马无疆
- 2013/9/17 17:18:50
看不下去。好久没写作文了。

- 理论研究
- 2013/9/18 11:10:21
已阅。。。。。
好吧,我承认我看不懂
好吧,我承认我看不懂

- 淡蓝涩
- 2013/9/19 1:45:31
偶要考六级

- 麦秆精
- 2013/9/19 16:54:29
好吧。我承认我没看。。

- 杏帘诗
- 2013/9/20 0:15:14
应试作文没趣

- 月落日升
- 2013/9/20 22:41:40
水平有限。,仅指正LZ一个问题。 第一句话Why people live a longer life now? 应该用感叹号结尾。
其实我建议网上搜范文。 to be healthier 差不多的题目
其实我建议网上搜范文。 to be healthier 差不多的题目

- 独立苍茫子
- 2013/9/21 6:00:12
好久没看书了 看着这些都觉得陌生..

- collie
- 2013/9/21 21:28:10
我表示看不懂~~~