On a harmonious dormitory life

Nowadays, it is generally accepted that having a harmonious dormitory life is of great significance to our college students. Dormitory is indispensable to our life, because  it is the place where we rest, study and live. Consequently, living  a harmonious dormitory life is vital to us .

How to live a harmonious life? First of all, we should learn to tolerate each other and forgive others’ minor mistakes. In addition, sharing things with roommates will make us happier and closer with them. Besides, if we have some bad habits , changing ourselves is a good way to minimize conflicts.

In my personal point of view , a harmonious life can provide us with quiet environment to rest , can provide us with friendly atmosphere to discuss  various problems , can provide us with good environment to be healthy. Therefore, joining hands to make our dormitory life more harmonious is the task which we can’t overlook.

英文的啊！看不懂。

文章写得不错，字词不会重复，复杂句也多，内容也有先后。不过，题目跟你讲的内容不太相符吧，第一段应该是顺着题目引出话题，第二段解释WHY并且告诉人家HOW TO DO ，最后总结重申观点，可是，呵呵。。。 In addition, sharing things with roommates will make us happier and closer with them. Besides, if we have some bad habits , changing ourselves is a good way to minimize conflicts.
总感觉这两句有点问题。个人见解，还请多多包涵

同学说的是，谢谢你的指教！