Title:The Purpose of College Education
1.目前，中国高等教育不再是少数人享有的教育，拥有大学文凭的人数日益增加
2.大学生失业不再新鲜，因此有人认为读书无用
3.我对大学教育目的的认识
                                                  The Purpose of College Education
      In a time,to accept college education is t o the wildest dream of many people.But nowadays,chinese college education is no longer the privilege of a small group of people.On the contrary,the number of people who receive college diploma is on the increase day after day.
      As a result,quite a few graduates start their own business as pork sellers in the market,or devote themselves to the career of brushing the toilets.Some of them even make themselves professional beggers.Therefore,it's quite ordinary to see a graduate in unemployment,and a thought that someone takes it useless to get college education ensued.
      In my point of view,the purpose of collegeeducation to show the direction we are going to.Education provides us college students with theory and skill.It's our own business to turn them into practice.In other words,college education is like a coach,he teaches us to run and we should fight for the champion ourselves.

噢噢....顶一下.....话说要考四级....

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      In a time很少单独使用(In the past), //to accept//The college education is /t o/ the wildest dream of many people.But nowadays,Chinese college education is no longer the privilege of a small group of people.On the contrary, the number of people who receive college diploma is on the increase day after day.

  As a result,quite a few graduates start their own business as pork sellers in the market,or devote themselves to the career of brushing the toilets.Some of them even make themselves professional beggers.Therefore,it's quite ordinary(common) to see a graduate in unemployment, and a thought that someone takes it useless to get college education ensured.(job security)
In my point of view,the purpose of college education is to show /the direction/where 一致性问题 we are going to. Education provides /us/chinglish college students with theories and skills. It's our own business to turn them into practice.In other words,college education is like a coach,he teaches us to run and we should fight for the champion ourselves.

够字数喇？
没细心研究~~~~~~~

好不容易用金山词霸睇完你篇巨著...............晕

I'm happy to share my views to u...
1. You performed quite well in para 1 which contained two useful transitions.
2.To analyze Para 2, I would like to give you a piece of advice. In English, the main point of each paragraph tend to be indicated at the beginning, which is quite different from composition in Chinese.
3.I should say....you are not doing good in making your composition coherent....there is no obvious connection among the three paragraph....you should dig out the interior logic in the request in order to make your illustration more coherent.

you have done a good job, keep trying!

好像四六级最好拿分就是作文和翻译了。。。。考出的分数比听力和阅读高。。。。

第一句话不通。。

``写得5错```我呢排都开始写 `不过无人改``5知自己咩水平```之前考两次``低分得可怜``

很好  没意见